I had a walk around riverside.
People played baseball. So, I watched the game for a while.
A plane flew overhead. I looked up it. I found the moon.
“川沿いの散歩”
川沿いを散歩した。
野球をやってたから、しばらく試合を見てた。
飛行機が頭上を飛んでた。見上げると、月が出てるのを見つけた。
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17 comments:
should be "I looked up to it"
:D
ur doing very well!
nice photos..
Nice Pictures
I agree.
i like the view of the riverside
i hope i can visit japan oneday!(can u bring me to japan? hahaha)
nice
The first photo is my favorite :)
Thanks for your comments!
Your photos are great - are you using a wide-angle lens? My favorite is the first photo. My favorite caption is the third one. :) Your English is great! Some words are out of order sometimes but not too much. :)
Nice pictures^^ I'm Thai. I don't know many Japaneses and I don't know many ones that is good at English; you are another one, I know now :D
I like the first picture. I like natural scenes!
I request you to Post some more natural scenes.
That is a very nice picture. You would say "I looked up at it" or "I looked up to it".
that is a nice picture!!!
how to pronounce: where were the ware?
if possible with the international phonetic code.
thanks!
Nice pictures !
I cannot give you advices about you're English, i'm french =)
I wanna see more baseball game! I wanna go to Japan!
I love these pictures they are so clear!!! I like the of the road the most.
Your doing well with the whole learning to write english!!!! Keep up the good work so that you can help me when i come one day.
hi I love your blog but I spotted some english errors such as;
people played baseball it's a lot better if u say people playing baseball.
and
I looked up it. I found the moon. In this sentence there are the wrong expansion maybe u should say i looked up and I saw the moon.
I hope my advice can help
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